The Calling
Visions erupt
unbidden..
A veil of power casts shadows
upon the newly Awakened eye.
Others lurk in adjacent proximity..
Their calling but a Thought
beyond the pale.
Darkness gathers as power takes form;
energy flickers, now falls, betwixt palms..
with subtle manipulations,
untold destinies do form
A feather’s touch of synchronicity
and the winding path not seen
unfolds..
Twilight overtakes the sun
Hence the Dark Babes swaddled by Night
will Awaken
to return to her arms once more.















Comments
great wording though
I will say this was a great read, and as said above, the choice of words shines through.
=].
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The Catalyst.
The Contemplicity.
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Phixion
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on one by your extensive use of ;ihadtogotowww.dictionary.comandlookupthewords;
kind of vocabulary
and the other amazement was in the truth of the words...
im bewildered honestly...
and this ones staying for a while
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The sheep need that sort of comfort
and the winding path not seen
unfolds.."
This completly grabbed me. The feelings it gave me and emotions it brought up. Simply a work of art.
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Only thing I could find that I didn't really like that much was the structure..
But still, great poem.
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#writers - [link]
Yep min was up .. Shadowed by your beautiful writting...
This is really good peice.. I liked it alot..
Keep up the great work ill be watching..
-Chris
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Wear your Grudge Like a crown
~Emm
energy flickers, now falls, betwixt palms..
with subtle manipulations,
untold destinies do form
I loved this to death. I'm adding this to my Favs... it was beautiful and amazing. Lovely work, Nyk
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"Truth comes in between breaths." - Buddha
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