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The Calling

Visions erupt
unbidden..
A veil of power casts shadows
upon the newly Awakened eye.
Others lurk in adjacent proximity..
Their calling but a Thought
beyond the pale.
Darkness gathers as power takes form;
energy flickers, now falls, betwixt palms..
with subtle manipulations,
untold destinies do form
A feather’s touch of synchronicity
and the winding path not seen
unfolds..
Twilight overtakes the sun
Hence the Dark Babes swaddled by Night
will Awaken
    to return to her arms once more.
©2003-2009 ~ladynyk
:iconladynyk:

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:iconspukee:
born, live according to fate, and die. Seems kinda futile doesn't it

great wording though :) (Smile)
:iconalcoholic:
I have not been much on the comments lately, hence my devwatch growing to 50+ until I forced myself to try today.
I will say this was a great read, and as said above, the choice of words shines through.
=].

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The Catalyst.
The
Contemplicity.
:iconphixion:
Love the vocabulary and just how it's conveyed overall. Good work. Keep it up.

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Phixion

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:iconbetween-balance:
I'm impressed by this on two levels hon..

on one by your extensive use of ;ihadtogotowww.dictionary.comandlookupthewords;
kind of vocabulary

;) (Wink)


and the other amazement was in the truth of the words...

im bewildered honestly...

+fav

and this ones staying for a while

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The sheep need that sort of comfort
:iconrebelchic:
"A feather’s touch of synchronicity
and the winding path not seen
unfolds.."


This completly grabbed me. The feelings it gave me and emotions it brought up. Simply a work of art.

Heart

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:shakefist:
:iconcomplex:
Great vocabulary.. Great general wording, and great use of poetic techniques.

Only thing I could find that I didn't really like that much was the structure..

But still, great poem. Thumbs Up

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#writers - [link]
:iconwaiting4chaos:
Well i decided to see if my Poem made it on to Poetry daily favs...
Yep min was up .. Shadowed by your beautiful writting...
This is really good peice.. I liked it alot..

Keep up the great work ill be watching..

-Chris

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Wear your Grudge Like a crown
:iconstormclouds:
Amazing..I can't pick a favorite part. It's all wonderful. As usual.

~Emm Horns
:iconfae:
Darkness gathers as power takes form;
energy flickers, now falls, betwixt palms..
with subtle manipulations,
untold destinies do form


I loved this to death. I'm adding this to my Favs... it was beautiful and amazing. Lovely work, Nyk :) (Smile)

Horns Heart

--
"Truth comes in between breaths." - Buddha

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