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Serenity

A smile,
etched within a memory;
baritone caresses upon
a mindful ear.
Rapt attention given;
on every whim, breath hangs.
Those words.  Those most precious
words of all the tongues of man,
when whispered down the line
electrify the soul;
all is not for naught,
but for them it is done.
It is all done, whatever is required.
Willing debt in acquiring self;
debt that gives in giving,
for giving in is beauty
and in beauty is peace.
and in peace,
I smile.


S. Nycole Bridle 11/02/2004

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Thinking of a friend whose voice I've been missing..

As is the case with most of my work, this piece is meant to be read out loud. So don't be lazy, let it roll of your tongue!


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an enjoyed read lady-
i appreciate short peices that provoke much thought-
good job..

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*cheers..
 I thought that was very clever-this poem was as usual really good. I love the way you set it up

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A simply marvalous read. I love it.
simply fantastic, pure and simply put its.. embracing.

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Ameas Qua.
There is a dream like quality to this. I'm not sure how that happened, but it is profoundly enjoyable.

Smile Nycole! :)
sometimes your word choice is almost archaic--but i in NO way intend that to sound negative. i love it.

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it's the beginning of the song god forgot to write.
thanks hon.. I would never take it as an insult. I merely prefer precise language *smiles sweetly*

How's tricks?

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thank you, hon, I'm glad you enjoyed it :kiss:

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*smiles* thanks, sweetie.

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